Tuesday, 31 January 2012

Pitch



This is the pitch I presented to my class.

1 comment:

  1. Your moodboard gives a good idea of the style you wish to adopt for your magazine. Rock/Garage is very rarely a genre people choose to do, so it will be interesting to see how you portray this genre. Your target audience is a good age range 16-25 years, why only men though? By targeting your magazine at only men you are limiting your market.
    Your colour scheme is good but explain in more detail why you have selected the colour palette you have chosen. Provide evidence of the research you have carried out in selecting your colour palette, showing other colour combinations you considered.
    Your test shots are good and you have experimented with the type of poses your model can do. Just ensure that your model isn’t wearing the same colour as the background they are against as it will make it harder for you to cut out in Photoshop, use a plain wall preferably green or blue.
    The typography is nice you have looked at now just give more examples of other fonts you have researched into, even if you aren’t using them in your final piece. In your pitch you said you want your layout of the text to be messy and unorganised, just ensure you don’t over crowd your front cover with text sometimes less is more. Give examples of ways in which you have experimented with making your text look messy and unorganised in a professional way.

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